Once on the Moon by Sydney (Hedgehog Class)

Once upon a time there was a man called Neil Armstrong and there was another man called Buzz aldren. They went into a rocket, they passes millions of stars. One of them was blue, and they landed on the moon. Buzz went around the moon, then they went back to America. Then they sailed to their Island and Neil saw his Mom. she is very helpful, well for me. Is you Mum helpful? Because mine is helpful.