Up and Beyond by Evan (Hedgehog Class)

Once upon a time a man wanted to go to space and his name was Neil Armstrong and he was the first one to land on the moon. He planted a flag and went round collecting space rocks and space dust.  They looked in a crater where a ship has landed and someone fell in it and came out of another crater.  When they walked they bounced because there was no gravity.  When they jumped they went further than they could on Earth.  Then they went in the space rocket and came home to see their family and they were heroes. They told everyone about their adventure.